I want to be part of the process and not just an armchair critic. Unfortunately, my 3 pages of Narrative explaining the design cannot be submitted. But this is a form fitting the situation- tragic but hopeful, substantial but unsubstantial. A work of art to draw visitors and guests to the memorial who might not be there otherwise.
As a work of art, this focuses the emotions on what is meaningful while setting up subtle contradictions to engage the mind.